My Writing · Poetry

Petals in a Pool-an original poem by me

Petals in a pool
They scatter when
Trying to be removed.

If you give up trying
to remove them,
You find they
linger to the shadowy
End of the pool.

Ripples caused by
my feet splashing
Do not cause them
to move.

They remain
Ever stubborn.
Sticking to the sides
Where no one can get them.

-April 23, 2013 at 3:57 pm

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2 thoughts on “Petals in a Pool-an original poem by me

  1. This is such a peaceful poem, really like it a lot especially the last stanza. Love all your poems along with all of your other stuff as well, so good.

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